The Coast Was Clear

March 25, 2010 at 9:16 am 8 comments

Posted by: Phil McAndrew
Book: From the Mixed-up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler
(purchase on Amazon)

The next morning Claudia and Jamie boarded the school bus as usual, according to plan. They sat together in the back and continued sitting there when they arrived at school and everyone got out of the bus. No one was supposed to notice this, and no one did. There was so much jostling and searching for homework papers and mittens that no one paid any attention to anything except personal possessions until they were well up the walk to school. Claudia instructed Jamie to pull his feet up and crouch his head down so that Herbert, the driver, couldn’t see him. He did, and she did the same.

Claudia and Jamie begin their great adventure by stowing away on the school bus after it’s dropped all the kids off at school. They hide in the back of the bus while Herbert drives the bus to the lot on Boston Post Road, where all the school buses are parked.

The bus bounced along like an empty cracker box on wheels- almost empty. Fortunately, the bumps made it noisy. Otherwise, Claudia would have worried for fear the driver could hear her heart, for it sounded to her like the electric percolator brewing the morning’s coffee. She didn’t like keeping her head down so long. Perspiration was causing her cheek to stick to the plastic seat; she was convinced that she would develop a medium-serious skin disease within five minutes after she got off the bus.

And so, according to plan, they stay hidden until well after Herbert parks and leaves.

When they got up, both were grinning. They peeked out the window of the bus, and saw that the coast was clear.

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8 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Jared Schorr  |  March 25, 2010 at 12:55 pm

    I read this book on the plane to New York. It was the right book at the right time. This piece is sooo perfect! Nice work Phil.

  • 2. S.britt  |  March 25, 2010 at 10:00 pm

    I love this Phil! I don’t know the book and I can barely read, but I sure do know great art when I see it!

  • 3. Renee Kurilla  |  April 13, 2010 at 2:03 pm

    I have never read the book, but I LOOOOVE this illustration.

  • 4. Breadwig  |  May 20, 2010 at 8:20 am

    So good. I remember those bus seats vividly. Grrrrreat illustrations!

    • 5. Samuel  |  February 8, 2012 at 10:19 am

      tgpariaweble on November 7, 2011 Not to be a troll, but in my PERSONAL opinion…I think neopets is funner when you don’t cheat ever 8 seconds. Its funner earning the Neopoints.

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  • 7. CALVIN  |  June 18, 2010 at 5:43 pm


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